Beginning: They are really good ,'' thinks Ray. He is watching his friends play in their band. they are playing music at Eric's house. Eric plays the guitar. Kenji plays the drums, and Yoon-Hee
Middle: Now he can play in the band. Ray plays the guitar with the band. He is not good but he likes playing the guitar. He wants to be a good guitarist.
End: Ray's mother and father come home. "Ray? what's this on the table?" asks his mother "And wrath's this on the floor?''
My part favorite is. Is this a good guitar.Eric he asks Eric tells ray father about the guitar. no it's not a good guitar Ray says But I want it dad it's great no don't buy it ray it's no good says Eric.